Thanks! Going to give your game a try :)
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Creative little ebook, thanks for the giveaway! Just a heads up, I found two small misspellings:
page 12: " The aliens never let poor Phoebe have a bath. She was very dirty from all the hard work the made her do." I think the 'y' was forgotten in "hard work 'the' made her do".
& page 14 "One day then they weren’t looking, Phoebe found a space ship and flew home in it." I think you meant 'when' instead of 'then'.
Cheers!